2016九年级英语作文

2016九年级英语作文

写做的步骤：

1、审：体裁； 2）主要时态:一般过去时：主语+动词过去式；一般将来时：will+ V原，be going to+ V原；一般现在时：主三单，动s；主三复，动原形

3）人称； 4）要点。

2、抓：中心或事件 3、扩：针对中心扩充词汇(when, where, who, what, why, how)

4、连：连词成句，连句成段。

5、改：检查主谓是否一致、时态、单词拼写、标点、单复数、人称、格式是否正确等。 6、誊：整洁地誊抄在答题卷上。（整洁不一定加分，不整洁一定扣分！）

一．如何做好“书面表达”

(1)认真审题，确定体裁，明确主题；

(2)正确使用时态、语态、标点符号和字母的大小写，注意主谓一致和单词拼写的准确性。

(3)力求做到内容完整、语句通畅、书写规范、层次清楚、卷面整洁。

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二．审题 1 确定体裁：

2.主要时态：一般现在时，一般将来时（开头或结尾） 一般过去时（中间事例）

3 人称(I ,She/ He) 4 段落: 三段式

三．题型与特点 中考“书面表达”常采用的题型有命题作文和提示作文。

1.命题作文，要求考生根据所命题目，发挥自己的想象力，紧扣主题，抓住与题目有关内容的要点、按英语表达习惯逐一表达.

2.提示作文 以“提示”的方式给出写作意向，对写作内容、范围等方面作了比较具体的规定,不能任意发挥，体裁常为记叙文和应用文，如：书信。

四．云南省中考“书面表达”属于开放性的主观题，以命题作文为主，在命题中体现了以

下特点：①题裁丰富，内容广泛，涉及日常生活和交际的多方面。选题贴近考生生活和情

感，具有交际性和适用性。②开放性的题目下有明确的情景提示和写作要求，不得随意发

挥；③体裁以记叙文和应用文（书信）为主； ④字数的要求：60-80字左右；⑤要求书写

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规范和卷面整洁；

五．中考命题趋势：关于爱，帮助，感谢，幸福。

1.Love : Love for…(自己给别人的爱) Love from…（来自别人的爱）

2 Help : 别人帮助你（老师帮助我通过考试及鼓励我，妈妈带我去医院）

你帮助别人（帮助同学通过考试，去老人之家，帮助饥饿的或丢失的小孩，送妈妈去医院。）

生活中处处充满阳光， 每个人都会得到同学的帮助， 朋友的支持，老师的关心，亲人的爱护，让你感受到生活中的阳光和幸福。请写一件你经历过的事情，说明生活的美好。

Sunshine in my life

Beginning:

(1)Everyone has different ideas about life. Some say life is happy, but others feel life is unhappy. In my opinion, life is beautiful and full of sunshine.

(2)Our life is full of sunshine /love/help everywhere .Parents’ love make me grow up happily .Teacher’s help makes me feel lucky.

Ending :

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(1) The thing makes me realize life is beautiful. Help and love will be around us forever.

(2) According to the thing, I realize life is beautiful. (If everyone gives more love, the world will be beautiful./ The more love everyone gives, the more beautiful the world will be.)

Mother’s Love

Beginning:

Our life is full of love all the same, but I think my mother’s love is the greatest in the world, it makes my life beautiful and colorful.

Ending: Dear mother, thanks for your love , I will study hard, and make your and my father’s lives better. I believe I can do it.

Help/Love

Beginning :

(1) Everyone needs help , helping others makes me happy and getting help from others makes me feel lucky ,so we should help others .

(2) Love is around us everyone , mother’s love makes my life colorful .dear mum , I feel I am the luckiest child in the world ,because I have

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you as my mum .

Ending :

(1) Pass the thing , I realize helping others is helping ourselves .If we give our love to each others ,the world will be more wonderful and nicer .

(2)Dear mum , I love you all the time . I will become a person like you.

3.Thanks : 妈妈，老师，朋友为你做的一件事（感恩），你为妈妈，朋友做过的一件事（行动上感谢）。

初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想。

Beginning: How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate(毕业） from middle school in a month. I am eager(渴望 ) to share my happiness and sadness with you.

Ending:

(1)From that, I learn that we should do our best to help people who need help .If everyone helps others as much as possible, the world will become much more beautiful!

(2)According to the thing, I think I will try to help others when they are in

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trouble, and it is a happy thing to help others.

(3) Dear my teacher/mother, thanks for your love, I will study hard and become a useful man who you wish.

4. Happiness : 别人帮助你或你帮助别人

幸福是什么？幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是…… 请以My happiness为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。

Beginning:

(1) Happiness is important and simple in our life. In fact ,happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.

(2) What’s happiness ? Happiness is mother’s love ; Happiness is teacher’s encouragement; Happiness is other’s help; In fact , happiness is around us.

Ending :

(1) I feel happy whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents' love. I want love. I want to be a good child for my parents.

(2) From the thing ,I feel teacher’s love ,it makes me realize happiness is

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around us all the time. we should treasure it .

Sayings: 1. Nothing is impossible in the world if you put your heart into it .

2. Failure is the mother of success . 3. Where there is a will , there is a way .

4.Don’t give up , believe in yourself, you will win .

5. A good friend in need is a friend indeed. 6. Interest is the best teacher .

一般过去时： A Pleasant Weekend

I had a pleasant weekend last week.

On Saturday morning, I got up late and had breakfast slowly. After breakfast, I went to the park with my father to play sports. Everyone knows that doing sports is good for our health. Then I began to do my homework. It was a little difficult. So it took me about two hours to finish it. On Saturday afternoon, I had fun playing computer games. While my mother was cooking dinner, I cleaned the living room and did some washing.

On Sunday morning, I played basketball with my classmates till 11:30. On Sunday afternoon, my family went to thr beach and enjoyed the bright

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sunshine. Next I listened to pop music. It made me relaxed.

What a pleasant weekend I had!

An unforgettable Thng

I still remember the first time I traveled alone.

Last summer vacation, I went to the summer camp. At first, I was a little afraid because it was the first time I had left home alone. But my parents encouraged me a lot. Then I met a lot of children and we became good friends. We went to climb the mountain together. We helped each other on the way. At last, we got to the top of the mountain. We were very excited.

I learned a lot from experience. I knew how to deal with them when I had problems.

A. smile can make a big difference

Smiles are beautiful and important. A smile given to the right person at the right time can light that person’s day.

I was once moved by a smile from my friend. Three years ago, when I made a speech on my first day of class, I was so nervous that I couldn’t say a word. Tony, one of my classmates, sitting in the front row, smiled at me and spoke in a low voice, “Yes, you can.” I was greatly encouraged by his smile.

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His smile was important because it gave me self-confidence.

I will never forget my friend’s smile because I’ve learned that something simple can make a big difference.

My Life Has Changed A Lot

I’m in grade nine now. And my My life has changed a lot.

My daily life is quite different. For example, I used to get up at 6:30 am., but now I have to get up at six to read English. I used to go to bed at 9 pm., but I have to stay up until 11:30 pm. to study. I can’t spend much time watching TV or chatting with my friends as I did before. I used to play basketball after school, but now I have to go home right away and do my homework. Even at the weekends I’m not allowed to go out. Now I have little time to play. Everything I can do now is for my tests.

I hope this kinds of life could be changed.

一般现在时：

My Free Time

I have a lot of things to do in my free time. Usually I take exercise after school. I like basketball and volleyball very much. Sports help me keep healthy and study better. I often watch TV or do some reading in the evening.

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Sometimes I listen to music for a while. I find it a good way to relax myself. Of course, I help my parents with the housework at the weekends. I clean the house, wash clothes and learn cooking. Sometimes I go on a field trip with my friends. I have a good time in my free time.

My Hometown

My hometown is a small village not far from the Changjiang River. It is in the south of China. A road runs through it, leading to the nearest market. You can see houses behind green trees along both sides of the road.

There are about 300 people in the village. All of them are very friendly. In busy seasons, most of them do farm work in the fields. The village is famous for its fruits. When summer comes, many businessmen drive here to buy them.

My hometown is becoming more and more beautiful. I love my hometown very much.

一般将来时：

My dream job is to be a singer

When I grow up, I’m going to be a singer. I love music and I’m good at singing. I want to be a singer like Lady Gaga. I can sing beautiful songs for

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people and make them happy. And also I can make much money. Then I can buy a beautiful house with a garden for my parents because they do so much for me.

To realize my dream, first, I’m going to join the singing club and practice singing as often as possible. Second, I’m going to be a student at a music school. At last, I’m going to take part in some singing competitions to improve myself. I hope my dream can come true.

This Time next year

Life is changeable, and that’s why everyone longs for the future, which is full of challenge as well as hope.

Perhaps I will achieve my goal this time next year, studying in a senior high school. I will have fun learning all the subjects. I will make great progress. I won’t need to do much homework. On weekend I will do what I like. I can take part in all kinds of activities and I can choose to learn the subjects I like. I can’t wait for that time.

Make plans and go for what I want. And I believe when the challenge is coming, the hope is also around the corner.

写人：

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Introduce myself

Hi, everybody! I will introduce myself to you.

I’d like to tell you something about myself. I’m Tom/ Lucy, a 16-year-old students from China, Asia. To experience a different senior life, I come here. I like the school, for its beautiful buildings and friendly teachers and students. I still have some difficulties speaking and listening to English, so I hope you can help me out. You are the ones I’d usually like to turn to when I’m in trouble. I haven’t had any friends or relative here, but I do hope we can be good friends. I like drawing, and I hope there’ll be art time for me every week.

This is myself. That’s all, thanks.

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